This is a type treatment I did for Black Book magazine for an article about Detroit. I never read the copy so I'm not exactly sure what the article's all about (you'll have to buy the mag!) other than that obviously it's about Detroit and how it gets bad press but actually maybe it IS going to have a comeback soon.
The illustration above is very long and thin because it's intended for a triple page spread. The double page spread would have "Detroit will never come back", and then you turn the page and see"...or will it?". Scroll down for details and the initial rough sketch.
INITIAL ROUGH SKETCH: